Determintation To Write!!!

Last night, I found out that... you'll never guess what! The author of the book I was reading wrote her first 'novel' when she was NINE! The same age I am right now! If you know me, you probably already know that I want to become an author when I'm older! So you know what I'm doing? I'm writing and writing and writing! I even told my mom about it, you probably know her blog, NO DOORS. It's awesome. You should totally read it, though I don't. Anyway, the problem for me is, I LOVE CREATING STORIES, READING, WRITING, AND STARTING THEM. But... I HATE FINISHING THEM! That's a great problem, right? I can only write short stories. One problem... again! I don't like planning my story, so I just start them and write, then save them, then lose them on the computer, and forget about them! Then I start a new one. I don't even remember ONE FORTH of the stories I've lost on this computer! Weird, right? But I REALLY NEED ADVICE! So can you please comment some pieces of advice for this? please? Thank you. Here's one weird, short story...

THE SOLID GOLD PYRAMID

Alyssa quickly slipped out the backdoor and ran down the street to her friend, Mandy's house. The sun was just rising, and nobody in town but her and Mandy were awake. "Hey, Mandy!" Alyssa called softly as she reached Mandy's house. She was sitting on the porch looking bored. "Ready for the expedition?" "Yeah!" Mandy's eyes started shining, and she followed Alyssa out to the town's park. They were scouting around when suddenly Alyssa saw a tiger rush about in the trees. "I have to check something out, Mandy, okay?" She said, turning to follow the tiger. "See you soon!" Alyssa ran to catch up with the tiger, and disappeared into the trees. Suddenly she was in a jungle, following a fierce tiger that eats meat and putting her life on the edge. Then a glimmer caught her eye. Alyssa was brave and was never afraid, and she knew she wasn't going to get to that glimmer in time, so she hopped onto the tiger, got it under control, and made it run really fast to the glimmer. When they arrived, Alyssa saw that the glimmer was a pyramid! Not just a REGULAR PYRAMID, a solid gold pyramid! Alyssa gasped in amazement. "Alyssa!" A voice called. Suddenly Alyssa was back in the park, hunched down and staring at the trees. "The expedition's over. Time to go home!" Mandy took Alyssa to her house and that was the end of the pyramid.

THE END.

hope you liked it! Tell me how to improve it, please! thanks! Bye!

Missin' Hawaii

Everything at school seems to make me miss Hawaii! I was there in summer, and I only go there once a year, and next year we might not be able to go there!!!!!!!! A song that we learned makes me think about shopping in Hawaii. now that I start to talk about it, I long to be in Hawaii even MORE! There are things that I can buy there that are to expensive here in the Philippines. Like, Harumika Dolls. they are only two, three, six, or ten dollars there, but here it is 1000+! I can't believe it! Daddy says it's highway robbery, but the dolls are imported. So WHAT??? Can't the business people CHILL?? (PS i'm just a kid, here) No offense, though. I still love Hawaii, the swimming, meeting friends I never knew my mom knew their parents, playing with my cousins (WHEN THEY WERE FUN) Okay, STILL no offense. I don't mean that, its just that... Anyway, I love Hawaii so much! It is awesome, and I think there was this man-made island? It's called magic-island. But the main reason why I miss Hawaii is because of the DISCOVERY CENTER. It's fun! A play ship, play airplane, play bakery, play jeepney, play dolls, play telephones, play judge court, play theatre, play police station, play making-cloth centre, and EVERYTHING!!! Even a play car which you can go under and 'fix', a play firehouse, a play fire truck! Everything is COOL!!! There is also a WATER PARK, Tubes, slides, scary, scary rides! It's awesome, dude. Also, the picnics on magic island! the visiting the petting zoo, eating dipping dots, watching TV everyday, eating ground beef with rice with melted sharp cheese, eating cheese-and-tomato omelette, watching GOOD LUCK CHARLIE, it hasn't hit the TVs of the Philippines yet, and by watching it in Hawaii it's my FAVORITE SHOW! what do I do??? Force the directors or actors to work harder? Create a transportation system for TV shows? KIDDING! Still, I miss Hawaii mainly because it was my... BIRTH PLACE. Yup, I was born there!!! And that is one of the awesome traits of MWAH LIFE!!! I love it! YEAH! Oh, so was my sister, C the Coolio. And SHE LOVES IT TOO!!!!!!!

interested

I don't really know why, but I am just super interested in Greek Mythology! The only greek mythology I am interested in are the Titans, the greek gods, and the age before the Titans, and the chaos before Uranus and Gaea. Uranus and Gaea were the father and the mother of all the Titans. How did the age of the Titans begin? Well, Kronos and the other Titans battled against Uranus and Gaea and chopped Uranus to pieces. Since Uranus and Gaea were immortal, they couldn't possible die. I don't know what happened to them. I only know what happened to the Titans, and I know practically everything about the gods and goddesses. It was Kronos's fault that the Titans went down. You see, Kronos's wife gave birth to Zeus, Poseidon, and Hades. But Kronos was afraid that he would be overthrown by his children, so he ate them. But gods and goddesses are immortal, and so are Titans. So they just grew up undigested in his stomach. But Kronos's wife rescued Zeus from being eaten, and tricked Kronos into eating a rock. When Zeus was old enough, he made his father barf up his siblings by feeding him a mixture of mustard and wine. Then the gods battled against the Titans, and the same as Kronos chopped up his father, Zeus sliced up Kronos with his own scythe. Kronos's own scythe. If Kronos hadn't eaten his children, the Titans would still exist. My favorite book series is Percy Jackson and the Olympians. Olympus is a mountain above the clouds. It's where Zeus and some other gods and goddesses live. The goddess that is on earth a lot is Artemis, a sworn maiden. In Percy Jackson, they say that she leads a group called the Hunters, immortal girls, demigods, mortals, minor gods, monsters, anyone who would like to join Artemis could join, except for boys. She doesn't understand them. The Hunters never grow up. Once they take the oath never to fall in love with a boy, and to honor Lady Artemis forever, they must STICK WITH THE OATH. If they break the oath, they die. But you COULD hug a guy, only if you are honoring a friend. I got all this, well, maybe not all of it, from Wiki.answers.com. Type in a question and if someone answered it, you'll get the answer! There is even what happens is Percy Jackson book five! If you don't want me to spoil it for you, fine. But I tell you, if you think Percy Jackson and the Olympians is boring, check again!

GREEK GODS AND ONE TITAN

Greek gods. The big three, Zeus, Poseidon, and Hades. Zeus is god of the sky. Poseidon is god of the sea. Hades is god of darkness and the underworld. Zeus got nearly all the attention and was the most popular god. He kicked Hades out of Mt. Olympus, which is a giant mountain on the clouds. To get there, you must travel to New York, and on the 600th floor of the Empire State Building will you find it. The food of the gods is Ambrosia and Nectar. Now, nectar could be the liquid that comes from flowers, but this is a drink that tastes like the best thing you could imagine. Ambrosia could be pudding or brownies. But it is Ambrosia squares. It sometimes tastes like popcorn. Both spread a warm feeling across your body, if not a god. But if you were a demigod, and had an overdose, you could get a really bad fever, make you really sick. And if you had too much, it could turn you to ashes. If it turns you to ashes, you’re dead. No, literally, dead.

Poseidon’s sons are Percy and Tyson. There was also Phelyphomus, but he was determined to kill Percy. Tyson and Phelyphomus was Cyclops, but Percy was a half-blood. A Cyclops has one eye, and only one large eye. Mortals cannot see this. The Mist is an invisible force that prevents mortals from seeing things demigods and gods do. If a Cyclops has one eye, mortals see two. Nothing out of the ordinary. Zeus had a child, Thalia. But they made a sacred oath not to have any more children. So when Zeus’s wife had Thalia, she found Annabeth, daughter of Athena, who was created out of Zeus’s own mind, and Luke, the son of Hermes who thought the messenger god had abandoned him, turned towards Kronos, the Titan Lord, and started to bring his body back together. Zeus was saved by his mother when Kronos ate all his children, but they were immortal, so they grew up in his stomach. But Zeus forced his father to barf them up, fought bravely against the Titans, sliced his own father to pieces, scattered them, and threw him in the Tartarus of the underworld, and the Age Of The Gods began.

ALWAYS CHANGING

Sorry, but I'm ALWAYS changing stories! My stories almost NEVER END. But rarely, I manage to finish a story- I once did, but than mommy asked so many questions about it that I got frustrated! I wanted my story AS IT WAS- but mommy typed questions in the end! I felt like it was ALL WRONG, so I deleted every word of it. The OTHER story I finished I copied from a website. I just tweaked it a bit. Hope I can blog again soon! Bye!

Knights, The Beginning

It was night, and everyone was asleep, Yeow! Squealed a small cub from the inside of the circle of tall bramble bushes. There was a small entrance in the brambles, but the cubs would stay by their mothers until they were old enough to live on their own. The cub, Hustlecub, crawled toward the entrance. He crawled out of the Cubber and into the camp. By the time his mother noticed him, it was to late. Before she could blink, an owl swooped down and carried of the cub, which yowled in pain. The owl took no notice. It flew away into the darkness of the night.

A sleek bright orange fox, Featherpelt, pushed through the hanging vines that served as a door to his den. He lay on a bed of moss, thinking. Suddenly, a vision of the owl that had carried Hustlecub away flashed in his mind. It had light brown feathers trimmed with black, and eyes as big as stones. Featherpelt paced in front of his mossy bed as he thought. Hustlecub was my cub. Why should I let some rusty own carry him away?! He thought frantically. The owl had carried him off last night. The whole pack was furious!

“Let all foxes old enough to catch their own prey join here at the bottom of the Great Rock!” Featherpelt called. He saw his mate, Rosestone, join the crowd at the bottom of the rock. “As you know, Rosestone’s cub got carried away last night by a rusty old owl!” He yelled. “Well, that owl will be taught a lesson! Five patrols will leave at sun-down to track down this owl and bring him home for supper!” A cheer rose from all foxes. He nodded toward five knights lined up near the Great Rock. “These knights will lead the patrols! Weatherstripe, Goldenlichen, Frostpaw, Owlpin, and Featherstalk!” Featherpelt leaped down from the Great Rock and bounded into the Cubber. Rosestone followed him.

Once inside, the Nurser began to lick moisture from moss that had been left in the middle of the surrounded clearing. She pressed her muzzle down on the moss to squeeze out another mouthful. “Hustlecub was newborn! How dare that owl take him away!” Featherpelt raged. “Calm down, Featherpelt. I’m sure the owl is nursing him just fine.” Rosestone said calmly, not sure if she knew what she was saying. “What!? An owl, nursing our cub?! I want that owl for stew! I’ll cook it over boiling water! I will ever kill it myself, if I had to!” Featherpelt could work up some temper, there! “Careful, Featherpelt, you’re talking to loud.” Rosestone stood up and left the Cubber right then and there.

Featherpelt was furious with the owl! He leaped up on the Great Rock again and bellowed. “The patrols must leave NOW!” 25 foxes appeared and crawled through the prickly gorse tunnel to escape the camp and hunt down an owl. “Dustclaw and Brindlefit will guard the camp! Gorsepaw, you lead the pack! I have to rescue Rosestone’s cub!” Featherpelt leaped down and followed the patrols. “Sandcraze and Willowslide will come with me!” He called over his shoulder. A pale orange fox and a black and orange fox leaped out and clambered through the prickly gorse tunnel, following their leader.

Once in the forest, Featherpelt leaped and bounded and ran towards the Big Owl Tree, where nearly all the owls roosted for the day. Featherpelt leaped from one branch to another. He was a skilled leader, because as an apprentice- young Featherfur had taught himself to climb by leaping up difficultly placed steep and narrow high stones which stood in the shape of a difficult tree.

to be continued...

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